Tuesday, 6 August 2013

The Tree

Room 10 went outside Room14 to see the humongous tree getting cut down.
First they trimmed the branches off the trunk. The tree looked naked. It smashed to the ground. It smashed to the ground in a flash! It hit the ground like a bomb.
We were scared that it was going to fall on us but it didn't.
By Ford and Charlie

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1 comment:

  1. What great descriptive writing you boys have used. It was a humongous tree! You have used a great simile, it did hit the ground like a bomb.